Is this a good comparative essay thesis?
I think it’s a good topic indeed. I think your thesis sentence itself could be made stronger, like this: Paranormal activity is a critical element in both Wuthering Heights and Jane Eyre. It is used to illuminate the personalities of the characters, to show how the past manifests itself in the present and the future, and to demonstrate that passion overpowers all. Then you write one (or two) body paragraph(s) each for each of the three functions that paranormal activity is used for. Finally you draw a conclusion from your ideas, and write something that subtly repeats your thesis statement in different words.
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