OK, so whats the matter with the way I talked about ORGANIZATION? Didnt you say that Megs essay was better organized than Rons?

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OK, so whats the matter with the way I talked about ORGANIZATION? Didnt you say that Megs essay was better organized than Rons?

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Well, yes, I said that several times in class. So I didnt disagree with your conclusion. But I really disagreed with the arguments you used to support your conclusion. You basically implied that ORGANIZATION consisted of two elements: having a thesis statement that was in the introduction and having topic sentences that were easy to follow. Again, read and follow your spec sheets.

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