How can I write successfully in third person point of view(advice/tips)?
Try reading some third person point of view, to get a feel for how professional authors do it. Check out http://www.amazon.com and go to books that say “look inside” until you find a book where you can read the first page. See how the author talks about the characters, describes things through their thoughts and actions. Here’s the beginning of John Grisham’s novel “The Client” which is on his website here http://www.jgrisham.com/the-client-excer… “MARK WAS ELEVEN and had been smoking off and on for two years, never trying to quit but being careful not to get hooked. He preferred Kools, his ex-father’s brand, but his mother smoked Virginia Slims at the rate of two packs a day, and he could in an average week pilfer ten or twelve from her. She was a busy woman with many problems, perhaps a little naive when it came to her boys, and she never dreamed her eldest woul
